Not too bad but changing who is telling the story gets confusing and, well, old.
And anyone who writes To be continued should have her stylus...oops...computer...taken away.
Protecting the Heiress: Undercover Bodyguard Romance
by Nana Malone
One royal error in judgment was all it took for me to lose everything.
I’ve wasted years waiting to get my life back, and I finally have an opportunity. It’s a simple undercover job--but with a catch. A thirteen month-old, crying, diaper-wearing catch. Because I’m not going undercover as a cook, or a driver. I’m the new manny.
If it will get me back in the royal family’s good graces, I’ll grin and bear it. Even on the worst days, I know this will be worth it. I’ll keep my head down and do my job.
But it’s getting harder and harder to ignore my forbidden attraction to the baby’s mother.
The attraction that could ruin my last chance to get back in the palace.
So I’ll just get back in her bed one more time…
(This is Book 1 in the Heiress duet.)
Reviews
You jump into this one, but you only begin the story...nothing gets easily wrapped up, so you must read on to figure out what is really going on! Can't wait
This was a pretty good story with interesting sympathetic characters. Just when things were starting to get interesting- end of book one! Many of the underlying issues have not been explained. I feel like I’ve been suckered in and now hav to pay to continue.
This story was intense,I had trouble putting it down.The main characters were Neela and Jax,also Willa and her daughter.I think everyone will enjoy this book.It has alot more books in the series.
Except for the cliffhanger, the story and the writing were good. Flow and pace were good. Concept and world building worked. The characters were interesting. I liked the two main characters. I also liked Ariel (not the main h character), but everytime the story cut to her, it interrupted the main story.
GOOD story! You'll find yourself following along cause you want to know WHAT HAPPENS NEXT - that's Just Good writing! And this story is full of it!
Thank you for your time, talent and the story!
Will not purchase the next book . Totally think writers should be up front about two part stories. Makes me want to give up reading.
You have to buy three other books to finish it.
See title
Great read be prepared to by series as it is a continuation from the previous book , not a new story of a different character.