I enjoyed this story, reading it in a few hours. There were only a few characters in the story, so it had a pretty narrow focus. I still enjoyed it. The descriptions of memories were realistic, and the author didn't overly describe their world. Thankfully, the story wasn't bogged down with lots of angst and guilt. Some authors bloat their pages with the mental and moral anguish of the main characters. The H and h in this story were attracted to each other throughout the whole book.
What I didn't enjoy were the grammatical and typing errors. There was a section around 70% where the typist omitted opening quotes on many pages. Another common error many authors make is using the word "ground" instead of "floor" when the characters are indoors. I agree that better editing is needed!
Captured: Dirty Fairy Tales Series: Enemies to Lovers Romance
by Olivia Fox
Stone-hearted Predator. Hired Gun.But I just call him “Daddy”.Liam Whittaker.A man who hides in the shadows to seek his prey. The battle scars on his face conceal him from the world. He’s a professional problem solver and I’m his biggest pain in the butt.He’s formidable. Focussed. Chased by fiends both real and imagined.But beneath the cynical, stern exterior lies a true and tender heart - one that needs to command me.Too bad he’s employed by bad guys to haul me in and punish me for my so-called crimes.Even though I’m tempted to remain and solve the mystery of his demanding discipline, I know I have to escape and flee from his desire.He and I don’t stand a chance.I’m his enemy. A computer hacking, book reading, board game playing nerd who pissed off the villains that sent Liam to find me. Once he delivers me to them, my geeky days on this earth are over.But his lips scorch my soul and fuse me to him. They say that only in the darkness can you see the stars, and under the spell of twilight, his devouring kisses shoot me up to the heavens.He tells me I’m a good girl. But I must run away, half-hoping all the while he’ll catch me and keep me.From Amazon Best Seller Olivia Fox comes this enemies to lovers, alpha romance. Captured is part of her Dirty Fairy Tales series, inspired by Beauty and the Beast.Each book is a standalone, naughty ever after.♥ If you love scorchingly, steamy romance, scroll up and click the button to buy. ♥This book does not feature age play, pacis or Pull-Ups®. It does showcase the sparks that fly in this significant age gap and enemies to lovers story.
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Written poorly. Annoying characters.
This book was short but satisfying! Got me hot in all the right places! Keep it up! Well written. Beauty and the Beast done well.
